Deeper Water
Diving into deeper water
An opaque reality
With Mother Nature’s favorite daughter
She’s pure sensuality
In an opaque reality
Where all is right and nothing’s wrong
She’s pure sensuality
She’s been a goddess all along
When all is right and nothing’s wrong
You find yourself diving deeper
She’s been a goddess all along
You long to be your sister’s keeper
You find yourself diving deeper
Into some forgotten dream
You long to be your sister’s keeper
While currents carry you downstream
You’re there, in some forgotten dream
Embraced by Nature’s favorite daughter
While currents carry you downstream
Into ever deeper water
© Ravneng 2011
I think this is a great piece of work. Are you planning on keeping it a poem or perhaps turning it into song? As a visual person myself, I must say while I read the poem I saw deep colors of blue, purple, and deep green. When the lines come to climax in rhyme here are hints of silver. I great piece of work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex! I love the color references!!! So far, they're just words (on a white background. :)
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